世界很大，小嘉很小

红蝈蝈

不知足的小不点儿

昨天放学，小不点儿上气不接下气地、皱着眉头朝我冲过来：妈妈，大事不好了！我们今天有作业！

……（这也叫大事不好？）啥作业呀？

画一幅带有自己名字的画，要放到一个……地方用。

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心静 发表于 2010-10-8 07:56

这多有意思的作业,沫最喜欢这样的作业

幸福的小不点呀,我嫉妒,沫眼红:haose:

心静

小嘉的作文我都看不懂！:L
扬帆 发表于 2010-10-7 11:20

那个，嗯嗯，不是你的错。;P

心静

跟小嘉的土豆兵凑凑热闹，贴几句彤写的。小子就写了这么几句，大家别嫌短哈;P

“准备。。。。。。开始！”长虹剑裁判说。闪电队的雨花剑冲了上来，飞驰队的冰魄剑也冲了上来。他们打成一团。
jerryma 发表于 2010-10-8 10:56

强烈嫌短，强烈要求续写……俺要往下看……

jerryma

去我家看吧，心，小同学今天晚上又写了些

阿猪

跟小嘉的土豆兵凑凑热闹，贴几句彤写的。小子就写了这么几句，大家别嫌短哈;P

“准备。。。。。。开始！”长虹剑裁判说。闪电队的雨花剑冲了上来，飞驰队的冰魄剑也冲了上来。他们打成一团。
jerryma 发表于 2010-10-8 10:56

看得我扑哧笑出来了！;P

好可爱，喜欢:F:

阿猪

不知足的小不点儿

昨天放学，小不点儿上气不接下气地、皱着眉头朝我冲过来：妈妈，大事不好了！我们今天有作业！

……（这也叫大事不好？）啥作业呀？...
心静 发表于 2010-10-8 07:56

羡慕啊羡慕，口水直流三千尺 :haose:

小家伙，太不知足了 :curse:

心静

In the Galaxy Far Far Away

Mr. Potato wanted some more Potato soldiers. Later a lightning went up to the sky quickly, and then Planet Potato flew to another galaxy. This galaxy called "Dogs". Suddenly, three dog soldiers jumped out of the lightning. They had guns on their back. Potato heroes drew three swords and killed the three dogs. Later there were so many dogs coming out, Potato killed all of them. Then two potatoes came out. They said together," We are the Potatoes who are living in the lightning, but there are too many dogs here so we hide in the dirt." "We just need potatoes!" yelled Mr. Potato, "I will give you guys names:'Super Potato'and 'Eating Potato'".

心静

The Safe Day

The Planet Potato came back to the old galaxy. "There are only two Sea Turtles left!" yelled Eating Potato. "But we don't have any rocks!" said Mr. Potato. "I can take rocks from the Earth." said Human Potato, and then he flew to the Earth and flew back in a minute. But the rocks fell off in the space. Later Human Potato flew to the Earth again. He came back with a net of rocks. "Good!" said Eating Potato. "I will feed the rocks to the huge Sea Turtles." yelled Fire Potato. "OK!" said Mr. Potato. Fire Potato threw the rocks to the Sea Turtles, and then all the potatoes were safe.

jerryma

心，昨天给彤看了小嘉土豆兵的故事，彤被吸引了，这才激起了他往下写的欲望。在这里，谢谢你和小嘉:F:

我还有个小小的要求，就是能不能请小嘉把他的土豆兵故事用中文再说一遍，然后请你帮忙记录下来。虽然小嘉的文章我能看明白，但翻译给彤听的时候感觉失去了孩子语言的本色。如果是小嘉说的中文，估计彤更喜欢听。这样做会不会很麻烦啊？:$

心静

Car is Faster Than Legs

"It's too slow to walk." said Eating Potato. "We can make cars!" yelled Human Potato. "It's too small for us." yelled Super Potato. "Car Skateboard is better." shouted Fire Potato. Later they made a car-shape skateboard. It was very fast. It could go up and down the block hill. "It is very cool!" said Mr. Potato. He took the skateboard and used one foot to pushed the ground, and then it went up and down, up and down, up and down… Then Mr. Potato loves skateboard.

心静

More Monsters

When they finished playing skateboard, three spaceships landed on the Planet Potato. Then lots of monsters came out. Two-head monsters came out from the first one, then Long-body monsters came out from the second one and No-tail monsters came out. Potato heroes drew their swords to battle. But they just killed three of them, other monsters ran to Potato Land. Potato soldiers ran to Potato Land, too. When they just killed the second one, the monsters ran back to their spaceships, and hid, so the Potato heroes could not find them. Then the Potatoes went to sleep.

畅妈

呵呵呵，
终于被我等到了:victory:

心静

Fruit Attack Team

Later the Potatoes woke up, they saw Apple, Banana, Grape, Tomato, Watermelon jumping on five potatoes and the watermelon leader yelled," ATTACK!" The Potatoes drew their swords. " Why do you want to kill us? We are all potatoes, and you guys just have fruits on the top. That is the only difference between my team and your team. Are the monsters your enemies?" asked Mr. Potato. " Yes! " said the Watermelon leader. " Do you want to join our team? We can help you fight with the monsters! " said Eating Potato. " OK! " answered the Watermelon leader. So the Watermelon led the Fruit Team to join the Potato Team.

心静

彤妈，你也不怕累着我！:curse:

土豆星球攻打队——（一）土豆战神

在超级星系里有一颗叫土豆的星球，那里有土豆头的外星人，他们有着平底锅帽子，黑色的披风，短胳膊短腿。土豆星球上也有怪兽，有长身怪，有双头兽……土豆攻打队的队长叫土豆人，手下有吃土豆、超级土豆、英雄土豆、空气土豆和男土豆。每人有一到两把土豆剑，土豆剑可以把导弹击走。

土豆星球攻打队——（二）攻击怪兽

土豆人带着土豆攻打队去打无尾兽。无尾兽很特殊，因为他们没有尾巴也不会摔跤。如果你打断了一个普通怪兽的尾巴，他会跌跤。突然，一个怪兽跳出来，然后吃了土豆人。
“不好了啊！”吃土豆大叫。
“怎么了？”超级土豆问。
“他吃了我们的队长！”吃土豆拔出他的剑就打死了吃土豆人的怪兽。

心静

小嘉目前就翻了这两篇哈。

jerryma

:kiss:谢谢小嘉，谢谢心

一会儿把彤抓过来看，肯定喜欢死了

心静

今天在家整理东西，看到小嘉一年级时写的东东，颇有感慨。以前，我总是在心里抱怨他写的作文不够好，可是与这一年级的一比，发现还是进步了，呵呵！

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豆豆上学记（还配了极幼稚的画）

豆豆在床上，妈妈说：“豆豆快上学了，午can是胡luo卜快来呀！妈妈把豆豆拉去上学。

豆豆太不高兴了。他说妈妈今天能不能不上学。妈妈说：“不你是13班，你6岁了要上学了。”

豆豆到校chi了5分钟。豆豆吃午饭了胡luo卜很好吃。

第二天他就好多了。

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这个《上学记》完全是他当时的版本，连标点都是他当时的“杰作”，一点没改动。

另外一个想法就是：虽然寥寥数字，也反应了他自己当时的心理活动。;P

jerryma

小嘉小名叫豆豆？

一年级的豆豆太可爱了:kiss:

红蝈蝈

今天在家整理东西，看到小嘉一年级时写的东东，颇有感慨。以前，我总是在心里抱怨他写的作文不够好，可是与这一年级的一比，发现还是进步了，呵呵！

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心静 发表于 2010-10-13 02:09

可爱的一年级小豆包

扬帆

终于看到故事的中文版了，小嘉真不容易！好看！